If i left a strand of hair
on your shoulders;
If i knew you too much
yet know nothing about you
it means nothing, because
some clouds are not white
they are meant to be black.
some touches are meant to be void
some hugs wrap you but
dont fill you up.
some attractions are toxic
addictive, enigmatic
but they mean nothing
they evaporate once its exposed.
why then do we rely on such instincts?
life is a fluff
and we live in a bubble
waiting to pop.
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Is half full glass half full or half empty? Perception is important. Be optimistic.
ReplyDeletesue-n i agree on what u've said.
ReplyDeleteu've spoken some, i would always wanna to tell my friends here in subang.
i really cant agree on this davis,
it's not optimistic or not.
there's nothing not optimistic here.
harsh example, davis, how you look at raping,
when i say, raping is unpleasant,
is there anything to do with optimistic ?
just asking no offend.
sue-N ahr!!
i wish i could speak such like you.
when comes to different point of values among friends here.
Teddy, you are smart! yes, this poem is about rape. or about sex without love.
ReplyDeleteBut davis, not that you're wrong. we need optimism at a certain point, but sometimes, pain often comes before healing. harsh reality.
oh, perhaps i am wrong then. I thought it was about one-side love and contribution.
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